#RainbowSnippets: Rise of the Alpha Squirrel

RiseoftheAlphaSquirrelfinalDon’t forget to check out the other marvellous snippets at our Facebook group!

Today’s snippet is courtesy of MC Hana, who told me a story of an encounter she had with a hummingbird, which was subsequently adapted into this story.

“Shhhh. You’ll scare him,” Vince whispered, without taking his eyes off the coffee cup.

“Him? Who?” Nathan looked again, and only then did he notice the tiny green bird sitting on the edge, his long beak buried in the mess of melted cream at the top of the cup.

Nathan leaned forward to get a better look. The hummingbird stopped drinking and turned its head to one side to look back at him, all cocky, as if it was daring him to try to take his coffee back. It fluffed its feathers and shifted on the cup’s rim, like it was making itself comfortable for a long stay. Like it was laying claim to Nathan’s treat.

The amused look in its eyes was familiar. With growing horror, he realized he knew that hummingbird… Oh, no!

24 responses to “#RainbowSnippets: Rise of the Alpha Squirrel

  1. Oh, this is going to be fun!

  2. I’m so jealous of your snowflakes!

    • It’s just a plugin, but you have to be self-hosted to use them. I’d love to find an evergreen garland one for next year–the Christmas lights were funny, but not really pretty.

  3. Oh, no, you didn’t! I adore hummingbirds! The guy seems to be in for even more interesting times 😀

  4. Love the hummingbird, I sense an amusing story there.

  5. Oooh I am so intrigued by this one. I was entranced when you were describing the hummingbird, then the last line totally captured my attention. Sounds like trouble brewing

    • There. It showed up here finally. WordPress must have had a hiccup. There’s definitely more to come, and it’s not just Charlie we have to worry about. Actually, he’s kind of the least of our worries.

  6. I LOL’d at that last line! Classic! 🙂

    • Imagine how awkward it would be to have a friend who could turn into a hummingbird? They’re so small, you’d never notice them spying on you. Or setting you up for a prank.

  7. He knew that hummingbird, that sounds hilariously ominous. I’m loving it.

  8. LOL! I know it’s simply a matter of personal taste, but I have to admit I never felt very interested in shifter stories – until I started seeing some rather unexpected animals involved. Hamsters, squirrels, hummingbirds, oh my… I might just have to give them a try sometime!

    • Sometimes, you just need something a little different, right? Nathan worries sometimes about Vince getting interested in another shifter, but not wolves. Wolves are jerks. (Okay, that’s not how Nathan describes them, but you get the drift.)

  9. Don’t think I’ve come across a hummingbird shifter before 🙂

    • According to the shifters I’ve spoken too, they’re supposed to keep low profile. 😛 I don’t think you were supposed to know about him.


  10. I sense trouble ahead…..

  11. That last line was a great contrast to the rest of the passage–the perfect note of humour.

  12. Love it! It’s unexpected to look into a hummingbird’s eyes and see someone you know.:D

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